Hey! Nice stuff going on here. I'm digging this a lot. Just wanted to give my two cents.
I would say the walk seems as if the feet are leading the body and not controlled falling. I don't know if this makes sense.
The other thing is you have some nice asymmetry before 230 but after it's pretty symmetrical. I think the action of him acting out pulling on a string could be done with one hand since when you do pull a string on a doll, it's done with one hand/one finger, but having the other hand counterbalance/s-curve-action line.
The only other thing is the dino, when walks to the branch from 96-136, it seems like he's stopping to think about how to get over the branch. I get that, but it seems an action like walking over an obstacle like that, which he's probably done millions of times before, it wouldn't be a time consuming thought of how to approach it, he would continue walking and maybe do a little leap on or over it.
Let me know if this makes sense if you even agree with me, lol. Good work though! Keep it up, I'm excited to see it when it's done.
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Hey! Nice stuff going on here. I'm digging this a lot. Just wanted to give my two cents.
I would say the walk seems as if the feet are leading the body and not controlled falling. I don't know if this makes sense.
The other thing is you have some nice asymmetry before 230 but after it's pretty symmetrical. I think the action of him acting out pulling on a string could be done with one hand since when you do pull a string on a doll, it's done with one hand/one finger, but having the other hand counterbalance/s-curve-action line.
The only other thing is the dino, when walks to the branch from 96-136, it seems like he's stopping to think about how to get over the branch. I get that, but it seems an action like walking over an obstacle like that, which he's probably done millions of times before, it wouldn't be a time consuming thought of how to approach it, he would continue walking and maybe do a little leap on or over it.
Let me know if this makes sense if you even agree with me, lol.
Good work though! Keep it up, I'm excited to see it when it's done.
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